Southern California Engulfed by Fierce Wildfires
Southern California is currently battling a series of devastating wildfires fueled by strong Santa Ana winds.
The largest of these fires is the Palisades Fire, which has consumed nearly 15,800 acres in the hills north of Malibu. The Eaton Fire in the Pasadena area has scorched over 10,600 acres, while the Hurst Fire has burned through more than 500 acres.
Governor Gavin Newsom declared a state of emergency on Tuesday as the Palisades Fire erupted, rapidly spreading through dry vegetation.
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